Thursday, March 31, 2011

School Uniforms


Dear Superintendent O’Malley,
          “When we lose the right to be different, we lose the privilege to be free.”(Charles Evans Hughes) If we all have the same, boring uniforms, nobody will be different. However, all of us will need to compromise whether we are against or for. Those who are against, like me won’t be able to do anything about it therefore, they aren’t free. Boards of Educations through out the world are requiring school uniforms for students for grades K-12 day by day. Now the Edison Board District is slowly following them. It won’t be correct to punish students who wear their clothes appropriately. It would be unfair to wear specific clothes given and if not wore, the student wouldn’t be able to participate in school that day. 23% of most schools require uniforms. It would be the best choice to avoid uniforms due to the cost, uncomfortableness and losing the opportunity of showing personality and style by clothes.
          With uniforms, the cost would be way to costly and expensive and over the budget of most families. Others would say it is better with uniforms since students only need two or three pairs of uniforms and six-ten pairs of home clothes, the clothes we wear now. This is incorrect because parents have to buy the uniforms and more than six-ten pairs of home clothes. Even at home more than six-ten pairs of clothes would be needed because kids still want to show their style outside of school grounds. Just because not in school, doesn’t mean not outside of school. Uniforms can cost till $100 per pair, that’s expensive. Even less money is spent on seven-ten pairs of clothes right now. Most families can’t afford to pay the two or three uniforms and on top of that, a lot of after school clothes. Therefore, the parents would have to find a way to get more money, such as a loan. It is evident that it is expensive when school uniforms and home clothes are purchased.
          Most students agree on the fact that school uniforms are uncomfortable at times. In fact, most girls wear skirts and t-shirts as their uniform. When sports day arrives or having to run, it is embarrassing and uncomfortable to the girls. Imagine girls, you wearing a skirt on sports day, wouldn’t it be mortifying and uncomfortable while running? Also, most of the uniforms, both girls and boys require a tie to be wore. A tie is itch, especially on my neck. Others would say it is an iota amount of people who think it is uncomfortable, so let it off the hook. They are wrong because they still have a discomfort with uniforms. While the teacher would be teaching, those kids would be too busy being uncomfortable that they won’t pay close attention. School uniforms are uncomfortable to people and that can also be a distraction.
          The opportunity to show style and personality will be taken away with uniforms. With uniforms, people can actually tell what kind of person someone is. For example, when someone wears neat clothes, everyone can tell they belong to a respectable family and when someone wears gang clothes, everyone can tell he/she is irresponsible. So, with uniforms everybody would look the same therefore, nobody can judge what kind of a person someone is. Others would say with uniforms there would be less attention to clothes and more attention to learning. This is wrong because clothes identify the true you. Your uniqueness and individuality, which are also very significant, can be two of the things your clothes show of you.
          Punishing innocent students wouldn’t be correct and fair since they wear their outfits appropriately. The Edison Township schools don’t need an expensive and costly coat of clothing, a piece of clothing that is uncomfortable, and pairs of uniforms that make showing personality impossible. The decision has to be taken quickly or this issue could get worse. It is evident that having uniforms would have many consequences attached to it, so no school uniforms.


Sincerely, 
Shiksha Kohli

Thursday, March 24, 2011

Boardroom Proposal

Shiksha Kohli- Coka Cola
Fizz, Coka Cola! “The Refreshing Feeling in One Sip.” Coka Cola has been a hit since it came out in markets and vending machines. Even celebrities love it. Coka Cola is a carbonated soft drink sold in over 200 countries. That’s a lot of countries! Anyways, did you know Coka Cola is not only used for drinking? You can use Coka Cola to get rid of your pain and stress, to take away bad odors, to remove stains and much more. It is really helpful that Coka Cola can help us with everyday items as well as for drinking. Many consumers love Coka Cola and now we want even more consumers to. To reach that goal, you should air our commercial on your tv station, you won’t get a better opportunity.
Coka Cola gets a lot of attention with that comes consumers. You can tell that by how many cans are sold each day. Infact, Coka Cola is the #1 soft drink ever made. You'll be surprised by how many cans are sold each day. Over one billion cans of Coka Cola are sold each day. This means over thirty-one billion cans are sold per month. In addition, 91% of the people out there in the world enjoy Coka Cola. You can see Coka Cola really does get a lot of attention along with consumers.
          When you get one can of Coka Cola, it helps others. Not only are you helping us by buying our product but you are helping other people as well. When you get Coka Cola, 10% of the money collected by you and others goes to the needy in charity. That's not it though. Even 15% of the money we collect by consumers goes to the hospitals. The money sent to hospitals can pay a quarter or so for a person's treatment. Also, we donate 5% of the money to school foundations. All of this money can help others so much; charity, hospitals and school foundations.
Coka Cola comes in a variety of sizes and flavors which appeals to everyone. No one just wants one or two flavors or one size of the brand they have. Customers want options. Coka Cola has nine flavors and three sizes. Coka Cola comes in the sizes of small, medium and large. Small are cans, medium are bottles and large are 24 oz bottles.  
The flavors are cola orange, cola lemon lime, cola cherry, cola lime, cola raspberry, cola vanilla, coka cola (regular), cola green tea and cola lemon. Overall, you can see that Coka Cola has a variety of delicious flavors and different sizes to choose from.

         Some people say Coka Cola is unhealthy but the truth is Coka Cola healthier oppose to other brands. Coka Cola is only ninety calories. Ninety calories is really significantly less than other soft drinks. Other brands have over 100 calories in them. Also, Coka Cola is caffeine free. The Coka Cola company workers are also putting even more nutrients, vitamins and other beneficial ingredients in the coke. It is evident that Coka Cola is a healthy and delicious energy drink.
         It isn't just for drinking but it is used in multiple helpful ways. Everyone needs a drink that gets a lot of attention with consumers, a drink that can help others and a drink with a variety of sizes and flavors which appeals to everyone. The needs for these statements would tell you that you want Coka Cola. More and more people will buy our product if we persuade them positively and fulfilling their needs. The better and successfull company is always the company that works their best. Get Coka Cola, your perfect match and your best friend!








Thursday, March 17, 2011

Reflction of Commercial

      I think my commercial was good but I know I could have done way better. I liked my piece becasue I had creative ideas,  many facts and details about Coka Cola and it is convincing. I feel I was good at putting the whole script together, persuading consumers and memorizing my lines. Some areas where I could have improved in my commercial would be when talking infront of the camera, not laughing while shooting and memorizing my lines. Next time I do a commercial (probably never), I will try to act more proffesional and have more people. My goals for next time I write are to not laugh during random parts of the commercial and to try to make the commercial humerous and funny. I learned I am good at memorizing lines while shooting this commercial. Overall, I feel I did a good job on my commercial but I know that there will always be improvement needed.

Thursday, March 10, 2011

Coka Cola

I am advertising Coka Cola and I would love it if your tv station put our commercial on t.v. First of all, I am sure if you put our Coka Cola commercial on t.v., the company will be getting a lot of customers and buyers. This will help the company a lot. Coka Cola only has 90 calories, believe it or not! This claim especially, will get a lot of customers because other soda brands have over 100 calories in them. Also, Coka Cola has a great and astonishing taste to it. A one sip of Coka Cola can make you so energetic and energized that even if you came back from something that made you really tired, Coka Cola will do the work! There are many other coca cola commercials but I am sure that this commercial will persuade even more consumers to buy Coka Cola. Saying yes to this offer, will bring both of our companies a lot of publicity. Please say yes to this offer and after you watch our commercial, I am sure you will say yes!!!!