The holiday of Christmas is only coming up! On the night of Christmas, Santa Claus comes to town and gives everyone precious, delightful, and loving gifts/presents. As a wish for my present this year, i am requesting Santa to put a brand, new ipad under my Christmas tree. I know and can prove to you that I'm worthy for getting this astonishing gift.
Currently, I have an ipod at my house. I use my ipod to listen to songs and play games such as "Brick" when I am bored or tired. However, an ipad would be much easier to handle. Also, my sister and me are always arguing about who should get to use the ipod first. Once I get an ipad, my sister and me won't argue which always leads to fighting in the house.
As you can see, I am worthy of getting this admirable gift in many ways. I am certainly really focused, concerned, and serious about my education because I would ruin my future life. If I stick on getting a good education, I can be successful when i grow up. I also get really good grades in all classes. If Christmas wouldn't be coming up about a month from now, I would have taken my parents to a store and bought it with my own money that I have been saving for about four months now. as you can see, I am really desperate and looking forth to getting an ipad.i know at this time of year, you are engaged at work with a bundle of requests from people throughout the world. With many wishes of mine, I chose this one because it is the most important one of all and I like it the most! Once again I know you will be really busy so whether or not you are going to bring this gift i have chosen, thank you for all the gifts you have given in the past!
Good job, Shiksha!!!!! I really like how you used other words to discribe your gift that you want then just using regular words. For example instead of doing lots of requests, you did bundle of requests. One thing you could improve on is looking over a check for spelling mistakes and miscapilization. Overrall, GREAT job!!!!!
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