Thursday, March 17, 2011
Reflction of Commercial
I think my commercial was good but I know I could have done way better. I liked my piece becasue I had creative ideas, many facts and details about Coka Cola and it is convincing. I feel I was good at putting the whole script together, persuading consumers and memorizing my lines. Some areas where I could have improved in my commercial would be when talking infront of the camera, not laughing while shooting and memorizing my lines. Next time I do a commercial (probably never), I will try to act more proffesional and have more people. My goals for next time I write are to not laugh during random parts of the commercial and to try to make the commercial humerous and funny. I learned I am good at memorizing lines while shooting this commercial. Overall, I feel I did a good job on my commercial but I know that there will always be improvement needed.
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Nice post Shiksha!!!! I had a really great time doing this commercial. I thought it was alot better then just writing the persuasive essay. One thing that you could imorive on in this post is make sure what you write makes sense because at one point you wrote that you need to improve on memorizing lines, and then you wrote that you learned that you could memorize lines. I liked how you added details in. All inn all, GREAT POST!!!
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