Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is Halloween on Sunday! I can't wait, my favorite part of Halloween is going TRICK-O-TREATING. I go trick-o-treating at 5:00 or 5:30. I go with my friends and we have lots of fun getting candy. This time only comes once a year so I always have as much as fun as I can. Whenever I go trick-o-treating, I always start eating my candy whenever I get it. I love candy! The bad part is that it makes your teeth get cavities which is bad. Then you have to go to the dentist where you will get your tooth pulled out. That hurts a lot so watch out for the candy. Even though I am saying this rightnow, on Halloween night I won't be able to control myself and I am 100% sure that I am going to eat a lot of candy. A little candy is okay but not a lot. Anyways, HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!!!!!
Nice post, Shiksha! You focus topics that relate to each other and have an enthusiastic voice in your writing. To enhance this piece, you could expand this to include more information about your favorite types of candy. I hope that you had a great Halloween! Overall, nice job!
ReplyDeleteNice post, Shiksha!!!!!! i LOVE the part when you said that you score for alot of candy!!!! yummmmmmmmmm. On thing that you should work on is stayign on topic. Overalll GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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